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    ironman fanart ... (Closed)

    couldnt get the metallic luster properly.

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    Have you painted lots of metallic objects from life recently?
    "I eat comics and poop stylization"
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    Ashamed to say NO !!!

    @tinybird: no ... shhhh hard to say that but thanks man ll do some armor studies ... drawing from life is a privilege i dont have as of yet

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    Quote Originally Posted by zomg View Post
    drawing from life is a privilege i dont have as of yet
    Well, I'm sure you have some metal things in your kitchen? Spoons, forks, aluminum foil, pots or pans or thermos bottles? Or have parked cars on your street, etc..
    Pick a fork and paint it digitally or traditionally.
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    I would also look into some more shiny new cars and other showroom images for good references for edge lighting and other such luxuries.
    One last thing that I cant seem to reconcile is that looking at the poor boy you could stretch the neck a bit he looks very uncomfortable like that and it seems he has no space for his neck! I think you have tried to make it look like he has his head forward but for me it looks like he has a really small neck, sorry.

    all the best with the image though it shows some promise.
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    contructive criticism is awesome :

    @tinybird: yes i do but i dont have the proper environment to light up those to get the kind of shiny effect ... but i will do some fork study though.

    @lightship: yes thank you for the showroom study idea. ll probably do a car next to get the lighting and form definition.

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    For a "shiny" effect I'd say it's enough if you darken your room a bit and light that spoon with a flashlight or a desktop lamp.

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    What lightship said about edge lighting sounds about right! probably best to see examples of metallic objects from real life using a light source to study would definitely give a good idea I reckon.

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    Thank you guys for your crits ... I ll be doing some studies as suggested.

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    well , the neck before the light edge things , the neck is just too short
    It gives a funny impression

    The shoulders are too close too

    I suggest do a simple iron man with cartoon edges and stuff and if you master that , then you can go beyond that.

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