Battle vending machine and man WIP Critiques welcome!

[Alex_A]

This is my first time posting on Conceptart.org



Any critique welcome!



website:http://www.alexallendesign.com

[Candra H]

I like the idea but I'm not sure it's reading properly. Is it supposed to be a man battling a vending machine? If so, the man isn't interacting with the vending machine and is just standing to one side with his arms crossed. If the vending machine and the man are together and battling something else, again the man is just standing around and not looking very menacing.

So depending on what you're trying to convey with this, I think you might need to change the title, or make the picture story (narrative) easier to understand.

On a positive note, I think the colours on the vending machine and it's pose with the smiley face shield work really well.

[Jacobiahs]

A nice play on transformers it would great to see your robot firing soft drinks at something. It does seem like the man is just there for scale. The lighting is a little misleading it doesn't distract but it falls on the right hand side of the man and the left of the robot. It is also on the underside of the mans left arm.

It feels like you have two light sources but you haven't been consistent with the colour of each source. I do like the golden light it feels very positive an optimistic.

Also it looks like a cig in his hand. He looks far to athletic and healthy to be a smoker but then you may be trying to indicate that he's not all good and a bit of a rogue.