Hunchdebunch's (mostly comic-filled) Sketchbook

**Hunchdebunch** · December 1st, 2011, 02:27 PM

The title is in anticipation of the likelyhood that this will mostly contain comic pages

**Hunchdebunch** · December 3rd, 2011, 06:26 AM

An image I did for fun a couple of months ago

**Warforce17** · December 3rd, 2011, 06:35 AM

What is the bad idea avout the slicing machine?
It´s cute, sweet and you can watch it day and night.

Ah, and good start here on concept art. I can´t give you artistic criticism but as a viewer I find you shadowing in the last one a bit disturbing. It doesn´t melt in with the painting and makes it look kind of "dirty". (Limited English)
In your third post (wolves) it looked better.
Greetings,

Warforce17

**Hunchdebunch** · December 3rd, 2011, 06:40 AM

Originally Posted by Warforce17

What is the bad idea avout the slicing machine?
It´s cute, sweet and you can watch it day and night.

Ah, and good start here on concept art. I can´t give you artistic criticism but as a viewer I find you shadowing in the last one a bit disturbing. It doesn´t melt in with the painting and makes it look kind of "dirty". (Limited English)
In your third post (wolves) it looked better.
Greetings,

Warforce17

Thanks very much

The comic page with the wolves was actually drawn much more recently than the other piece, so I've had time to work on that shading, but I see exactly what you mean about the painting looking sort of dirty. Thanks for the advice!

**Hunchdebunch** · December 6th, 2011, 05:18 AM

The most recent page of my graphic novel

**Hunchdebunch** · December 15th, 2011, 02:33 PM

My newest comic book page; I tried adding in a texture I created traditionally, to give it a bit more of a painterly appearance

**Hunchdebunch** · June 24th, 2012, 07:35 AM

I haven't been on here in long time! But here is the most recent double page of my comic

**Hunchdebunch** · June 30th, 2012, 07:24 AM

Here are some concept sketches for a comic series I'm planning

**cgaddict** · June 30th, 2012, 09:29 AM

Good start here. As for critiques, I'd say focus much more on the basics and construction to help you achieve results in regards to drawing figures. The more comfortable you are with the basics, the better, faster, and easier figure drawing will be. Keep it going!