So, I'm trying to branch out more and improve my skills with lighting, dynamic poses, environments, etc. Fanart isn't the best way to go, but sometimes I really enjoy playing with characters who already have a set way to move, a set "style."
I mostly need feedback on the lighting and the environment. With the way I have the layers set on GIMP, I'm not going to be able to alter the characters' poses, so any feedback there will go into future reference (and I will still be utterly grateful for it). I'm not looking for feedback in my work process.
Another note: the strange white flecks around the characters will be dealt with on the final image.