JayZii's Sketches and Classroom Doodles (Please Critique)

[JayZii]

Hello. I've been drawing without applying myself for the past couple years. Within the past few months I have started to get serious. Please help me out with comments and critiques.

Cheers

[JayZii]

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[jedininjaman]

Seems like you have some good design instincts. A more complete illustration would really reveal what you need to work on. My guess is that your figures need some more structure and that you would benefit in studying the connection points in the body.
Welcome to CA I hope you stick around

[Lyraina]

Welcome!
Very nice start so far.
I'm looking forward to your future stuff, keep them coming

[el eiko one]

welcome! good start so far
like the burger pokemon looking from behind

[JayZii]

Thanks for the feedback everyone.

Jedininjaman- I'll update with some figure studies when I get back to my scanner

[JayZii]

Some old hand studies that I had a scan of... with broken fingers lol

[Sushy]

cool stuff so far, interesting

[Cojac]

I love your style, but I'd like to see more anatomical studies. Keep practicing.

[JayZii]

Sorry for the delay, it's finals week and all that. Just some faces from imagination and poses from observation on campus today.

Comments are welcome.

[syrella]

I really like your ink work You've got a good grasp of line weight. I think just keep drawing and keep at it! Maybe do a few more face/skull studies, if you feel up to it.

[JayZii]

Yeah i definitely need to do more anatomy studies. It's funny how many errors I don't notice in the sketchbook that come up once the work is scanned.

[Guardian G.I.]

Looks pretty interesting, so far. I'd better keep an eye on your work, see where it goes, take a note or two for my own stuff...

[JayZii]

montage .gif I've started working on...

[JayZii]

some male figure studies, it's too easy to get into the habit of drawing females

[Barilzar]

Interesting work sir. Keep posting.

[JayZii]

Some quick female anatomy practice and doodles...

[JayZii]

A few faces before bed

[JayZii]

doodles from class

[JayZii]

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[JayZii]

Peel the sketchbook pages apart to reveal...

[Metallurgist]

Im with Jedi, what you have uploaded is great, but I would love to see a more developed piece

[JayZii]

A sampling of things from this semester. 20 min Figure drawing, stencils, scratchboard recreation of a Bacon painting, and a watercolor piece.

[JayZii]

Just doodles...

[JayZii]

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[JayZii]

Eva!!

[JayZii]

Sorry for neglecting, I've been without a computer for a bit. I should be updating with work soon.

[Zephyrion]

good stuff! nice line quality

[JayZii]

Sorry I haven't kept up. I have no studio classes this semester so I've been knee deep in art history classes and Japanese. I'm going to start uploading my random sketches on the back of notes and class worksheets since I have about 50 or so pages of them. Please excuse the quality as some of these papers don't hold up well to scanning.

[JayZii]

some more... nothing too in depth obviously, just doodling around to keep my hand in drawing condition.