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    your comments please

    I have been posting pictures on deviantart for a while now.
    but most people there seem to be tennage girls that give no real advice on how I can improve my skills.

    any advice or comments that can help me improve would be great.

    thanks
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    Actually I like your stuff the way it is. You've got a nice Paul Pope vibe going on there. Maybe work on backgrounds, but that's all I can think of.

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    here is the biggest tip I can give. dont only post a link, people dont like that much around these parts. besides I think there is a rule that you must put up a pic. all I saw of yours was a mech pretty nice but I relly cant crit because it was a thumbnail. maybe if you post a pic I'll crit that. or I just might giggle like a little school girl and say AWSOME!
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    Some really good stuff on there, that "Hostage" looks kinda like bengal's stuff, at least the coloring anyway. But I0N's right, posting pics is the rule, or at least a link to a specific picture. Just linking up to your sire is more for the lounge than anywhere else.

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    CA Forum etiquette aside, you've got some really top notch stuff there. While I'm not a teenage girl, I sadly can't really give you any tips to improve. But I can say, with the level of work you've got going on there, if you start posting some actual pictures here you're sure to draw some attention and get some valuable crits.

    So, bring it on!

    Bah...DA's anti-linking stuff foiled me...I tried to link some of your pics, but no luck. Sorry.
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    most people there seem to be tennage girls that give no real advice on how I can improve my skills
    mmm I know what you mean, nice stuff though. I would give you some crits but I dont feel like im in any place to... maby at some point though ..

    cheers

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    trhanks all who have answered so far.
    And yes I did know about the rule and yes I would like to post here, but I dont know how.
    I am a member but It keeps telling me I cant do it.
    so I always gotta link.

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    You should have a little toolbar above the text entry window....there's a button that says IMG ... that's probably the easiest way to get an image into your page. (In other words, you still have to link images that are hosted on another website...there are very few people actually allowed to upload images to this server.)

    And as far as I know Deviant Art doesn't allow remote linking.

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