Sketchbook CRIT NEEDED

[Care]

bah difficult.... not happy with these today. was lacking something.

[Care]

Gestures again today, felt more alive.

starting to get the hang of these after like hundreds of tries....

[Care]

gestures

[Care]

design now finished!

[James Thomas]

your work is pretty good, but im wondering what your aiming for exactly, are u aiming to be an architecture designer, because some of your "art"work seemed really conceptual, but lacked structure (ie the random line drawing ones with the various color), tho i think u shud be looking for shape and form and then apply them to building/architecture design. or even isolate elements of architecture and use them IN the artworks. (architecture is practically artwork anyway) haha.
look up some cathedrals and so forth, some amazing art sculpting within themselves!

[Care]

thanks for the compliment! much appreciated. Yea im aiming to be an architect someday.... i think...

Im on the case! And the cathedrals yea are works of art to themselves

i will definetly aim to be more consistent in the future, atm im just kinda experimenting and trying to build my skills.

[Care]

gestures, loomis.

[Klaustrophil]

You have a good sense for perspective. Your gestures on post 33 are very interesting.
greetings
klaus

[Care]

thank you sir! the lying down one with the legs out front is one that im gonna try make into a full piece

[Care]

some quick concepts (2h) for a website logo...

I really wish i tried harder with this one, good idea but the arms are all bleh...

still can refine later!

[DoubleThink]

great lines in this last one!

[Care]

thanks for the compliment! any criticism?

heres some concept sketches for a cup.

any comments welcome!

[Care]

Studying the landmarks on the body...

unsure about how these turned out will try again later

[Care]

so this ended up well

any comments or critiques welcome

[Somelar]

hi man! nice to see you're really dig into design and experimenting your learnings make sense, keep it up!

[Care]

thanks for the input much appreciated!

this week i designed a cup! colour is still very difficult for me but i am starting to get a rough idea.

[Care]

Window designs

[Care]

finalised window design, which shows how the window opens and allows air into the building

This was fun.

[Damien Levs]

Hi Care Thanks for commenting on my sketchbook thread. You have got some great studies here. I really like your industrial design stuff. I noticed your thread in the community mentoring section. I wondered if it would be ok to join you in your ventures in that thread? I would really like to do more ID stuff and it would be fun to study with someone.

Keep going with that anatomy. Good going!

All the best!

[Care]

cheers and yea sure!

[Care]

figures and design. the design was a struggle. the female figures even more of a struggle i think there is less room for error with females....

[Care]

starting some anatomy practice

[Care]

v.proud of these all three from the mind. no reference used any comments welcome. i really like the female. It definetly could be cleaner.

[Care]

saw some shapes got inspired and decided to try my own. nice results dunno where i could take them though.

[Care]

Anatomy Day,

Coming along nicely

[micahchampion]

You draw a lot. That's the only thing you need to do. Your figure work is great. I detect some Loomis reading with the change in your manikins and the perspectival rendering of your human figures. Mastery of the human form, my guess for you is well on its way. I really like your value studies--especially the tiger--and wonder if you might not treat us to some value studies of the human figures you've practiced. That might result in a pleasing learning experience for you.

Best

[Care]

thank you for the kind words! v much appreciated. and i went to life drawing yesterday so i will try and upload the finished result later today. later this week i will have a good go and do some traditional pencil drawings from pixel lovely.

[Care]

Guitar designs, concepts.

[Care]

guitar concept finally done. could have taken this further but was alright with the outcome. next time....

[Care]

anatomy practice