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    unsure of where to go from here (nsfw)

    I've been thinking of this idea of "trophy" for a while and jotted this much down, but i'm not really sure what to do with it now.
    I don't really know how this reads right now, if anyone with a little more understanding of art could give me some thoughts I would really appreciate it.
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    I think the trophy would be more interesting if you placed it in a context, in someone cozy room on the wall. Then the contrast between she being a (former) person, and she being treated as a dead animal and hanging from the wall as trophy would be a lot more striking.
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    This is an interesting idea eyestrain. I agree with w176, I would suggest doing a bunch of thumbnail sketches. Explore different options for settings, composition, lighting, etc...

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    Thank you both!

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    I like where you are going, but I'm going to repeat what everyone else has said - do a bunch of thumbnails. I feel like the breasts just hanging there distract from the rest of the image.
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