A couple creature concepts...what do you guys think? Suggestions to improve?
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A couple creature concepts...what do you guys think? Suggestions to improve?
Last edited by bkim917; March 9th, 2012 at 11:19 AM.
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It's quite evident that you are imitating Marvel comic book style or something like it. It would be better if you focused on making the lines describe the form, instead of a stylistic affectation. You need lots more structure, more solidity, more sense to the volume and perspective.
Get Loomis's textbooks, look at how he constructs his drawings, learn to do the same.
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I can't see the images, did you use the attachment manager? http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=221049
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I edited the post and used the attachment manager. Hopefully, you can see it now.
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