Another superhero pose.
Michael Freeman
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Another superhero pose.
Michael Freeman
Level 4 Gladiator: Meridiani
Here's my critique on my own art:
His legs are short. Thighs look ok. The problem lies in the ankles. Lower leg needs to be longer. Feet could be bigger as well.
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Level 8 Gladiator: Thracian
I think you need to study anatomy in general, it all looks off. And use a ref, that will make it that much better.
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Michael Freeman
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WIP done for now
Quite a character.
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I think you could've worked a bit more on the anatomy before calling it "finished". Overall I think he looks too stubby and his legs and feet need some serious redoing. For instance, his left knee should not be facing directly towards us.
Hoping for more updates!
Michael Freeman
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Sorry for the confusion... What I meant was WIP finished for now but still WIP. I will get back to it whenever I can. Thanks
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Hope I fixed the problem.
Pezz Kubie Deluxe
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Look again. The ellipses on Captain America's shield are not properly concentric.
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Michael Freeman
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Yes right. That is easy fix.Originally Posted by Pezz
I'm trying to finish the anatomy fixes first.
Michael Freeman
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WIP so far...
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Ok so what happened?
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This piece is stunning, showing a very dynamic pose and foreshortening, and it is dated 2001. Yet ten years later you struggle with anatomy? I just had to ask, this had me bothering with your last piece as well.
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Well drawing isn't like riding a bike, you don't learn it and know it forever. A lot of that info is lost if you stop drawing for large amounts of time. But idk, Interested to hear this also.
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Hmmm.
Marvel Vs. Capcom fan?
Michael Freeman
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FrogStar, Yes, I'm a fan of MVC series.
The idea may not be original but I certainly did the drawings myself (my Captain America version).
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