Heeeey. I've immigrated over from DeviantArt. I was kinda always nervous about this site since I considered it for the "big fish" only. But a few years have passed, and to paraphrase one of your users, "Deviantart is only good for asspats". I mean, I appreciate whatever asspats I can get over on good ole DA, but I need some more feedback to work with if I'm gonna get to a professional level. So in short -- in need of advice and critiquing here.
So this is what I've got. The reason I want help is I feel like there's something off about the composition. And it makes me frown. Er... I've never actually studied composition or taken classes. Since discovering them I've been reading the tutorials about it on this site (and thank you, they're very helpful) but I still feel like I'm in the dark. As far as this piece goes, do you guys have any suggestions?
Hnnn, looking now, I kinda feel like his ribs are all wrong, and like his hand isn't supporting her properly. But I think I'll wait for a second opinion before I do any overhauls, I might just be nitpicking.
I feel like I'm ranting. Anyways -- would it help you guys to critique if you had some info/story behind the piece, closeups, or if I posted some of the older WIPs?
Thanks in advance.