my sketchbook

[matsuiny2004]

most of this is on deviantart right nowhttp://browse.deviantart.com/traditi...cifi/#/d490grk

what can I do to improve this?

besides it being on lined paper

[matthewactual]

Post it here so it's easier. Then we can see your growth from start to finish.

Doesn't matter what paper it is. It's obvious you really like this two headed creature concept, so explore it more. What you have done already is pretty small and I doubt very much you spent a lot of time on them. So spend the time. Maybe some closeups on it's face or feet.

[matsuiny2004]

How do I post images on here if they are on my hardrive?

[matthewactual]

http://conceptart.org/forums/faq.php...b3_attachments

[matsuiny2004]

[matsuiny2004]

Post it here so it's easier. Then we can see your growth from start to finish.

Doesn't matter what paper it is. It's obvious you really like this two headed creature concept, so explore it more. What you have done already is pretty small and I doubt very much you spent a lot of time on them. So spend the time. Maybe some closeups on it's face or feet.

you are right it is a speed drawing I did. I do like your suggestion of a close up on its face.