Little Logo Animation

[Delicious Egnaro]

Just tried to do something simple to emulate Polytron's logo is Cinema4d:

[+oas+]

Well I'm not keen on animation in general, but the 2nd image looks to be the best visually. It has a very cel shade effect to it. What happened to the shading on the 3rd image?

[Delicious Egnaro]

The 2nd image was the illustration with just shading and no color. The 3rd image was a pass with flat colors added to block in each part of the character.

[egerie]

First of all, do you have the right to show this character or did you sign a non disclosure agreement with this studio? Be careful dude

[DanielBodinof]

Did they supply you with model sheets and directions? It's difficult to know if you missed the mark when I can't see what the clean ups are supposed to look like. I'm seeing some discrepancy with the girls left hand. In the rough, its against the back of the sleeve, in yours it's coming more forward. also, the ears on the creature look more like rabbit ears in the rough, and in yours, they look like horns. Did the ask for the detail in the costume or did you make that up? Also the anatomy of the creatures hand is slightly incorrect in your drawing, in the palm area. I'm being kind of nitpicky here, and honestly I would need to see the model sheets and directions they gave you. I briefly researched this company and it seems legit...

[Delicious Egnaro]

Egerie - Might as well not tempt fate then.

[DanielBodinof]

wow, it's like really bad doujinshi...i would consider the rejection a blessing, they probably don't pay much and expect tons of work. I've dealt with studios like them before. run, don't walk away.

[charlestinney]

since the OP is edited, i'm not sure what's going on with the reply posts, but, for what it's worth, I like the logo animation.