New sketchbook for progress

[viscuswalor]

Hi everyone! I am new in concept art and wanted some feedback bout my work, I will keep updating this thread with my new works from time to time

[dierat]

Very nice; I really dig the style and use of color. For a crit, I think the weakest areas of the first image are the hands and feet; it looks to me like you weren't really sure what to do with them. They're better in the last image, but I think they're still lacking compared to the rest of the figure. Keep up the good work!

[viscuswalor]

thanks for the input , yeah I get a little confused while drawing the hand and feet.. been practicing hands lately and I am starting to get the hang of how the hand and feet should be drawn like.

[Jazz]

What a cute style you have going! I like the warm colours and the expressions. ^_^ It may be stylized, but it's a fun one that makes for plenty of possible stories and unique characters.

Besides the hands and feet, I'll also caution you to be careful how you draw limbs, like the legs. For instance, in the first picture, I'm not sure if she's pulling on her pantyhose or what, but her left leg looks more like a cylinder; her right looks like a cute stylized leg. You want to make sure that what you're doing is still consistently thought out in the entire drawing. Also, make sure you understand what body parts are hidden and how (e.g.: one leg's position hidden behind another), as well as the ones that we can see. That way, you'll have more control over what you're trying to do. Never hurts to draw out the full body as a simple sketch, just to see for yourself (unless you've done that but didn't show it here. In that case, ignore my last advice.)

Good stuff!!

[viscuswalor]

thank you so much for the input, I will remember bout how I draw the limbs from now on I never thought of making the full figure before and then erasing the overlapping lines... thank you for the great advice jazz

[Rhubix]

I'm always psyched to see more cartooning on CA! You've already gotten some advice along the lines I would of suggested so I'll just say your stuff is super cute and stick with that.
My favorite thing so far is the rosy elbow and knee in the first post. It's a great little touch that I think deserves to be pointed out.
Happy sketching! post more soon!

[viscuswalor]

thank you so much Rhubix I will post my new works soon...

[viscuswalor]

some doodles and 10 min and 2 min drawings done from observation, will post more soon... sorry for the bad quality of the pics they are taken from my mobile camera as I don't have a scanner at the moment

[viscuswalor]

some of my previous days works... Hope to get my act together to draw more in digital cause I find it very difficult to draw something digitally...

[ismo]

Hey, thanks for stopping by.

Good start for your sb. The colors are vibrant and nice. Remember to work out the basics of anatomy too along with the figure drawing. I know it's an awful ca.org cliché to suggest Loomis and Bridgman, but I'm doing that anyways. I think you should check out Vilppu too

[viscuswalor]

Hey, thanks for stopping by.

Good start for your sb. The colors are vibrant and nice. Remember to work out the basics of anatomy too along with the figure drawing. I know it's an awful ca.org cliché to suggest Loomis and Bridgman, but I'm doing that anyways. I think you should check out Vilppu too

I love vilppu's way of teaching.. and loomis is my fav teacher I dunno bout bridgman though cause it gets kinda hard to follow him but I definitely practice sketching from his book and am getting the hang of basic landmarks in a human body too and how the figure works... thank you so much for your input...

[viscuswalor]

Done a new painting yesterday... I am in a very unfamiliar environment and it effects my work a little but still pouring down sketches in my sketchbook.. I get frustrated if I am not able to draw something will update again when I get back home to my scanner..

[KrispyKream]

Have you ever been asked to do a children's story or playboy cartoons?, your style and sense of color is killer man, if i can critique I'd say start making stories with that style

[viscuswalor]

Have you ever been asked to do a children's story or playboy cartoons?, your style and sense of color is killer man, if i can critique I'd say start making stories with that style

Thanks for your input! I am an animation student so I do create comics occasionally.

[viscuswalor]

So I have been away a long time mainly cause of my internet connection, I have been studying Charles Bargue drawings and I have realized that I really don't know how to draw hands, So I am gonna practice hands more from now on, I have not drawn hands in my recent sketches and I am sorry for that. Will post some more sketches soon.

[FightingSeraph]

Nice style, but there's nothing else for me to comment other than show us more.

[viscuswalor]

Nice style, but there's nothing else for me to comment other than show us more.

I will upload some more works today!

[Mr.Goblin]

Sadly, all that should have been said, have been said.. so great stuff you got there.. (again XD)

And yes of course, I would like to see more of you (same kind of comment again )

blablabablaa.. make me laugh and love your incoming characters as much as these ones

[viscuswalor]

Sadly, all that should have been said, have been said.. so great stuff you got there.. (again XD)

And yes of course, I would like to see more of you (same kind of comment again )

blablabablaa.. make me laugh and love your incoming characters as much as these ones

Thanks... I have been working on an 1950's style ad poster.. Will upload that too with my sketching adventures

[viscuswalor]

Colors are vibrant and Nice. Remember, working drawing of the anatomical basis. I know this is a terrible cliche ca.org suggestions Loomis and Bridgeman, but I do, anyway. I think you should check out the Vilppu too..

thank you so much for your input... I am practicing from loomis and bridgeman too these days...

[viscuswalor]

It's been a long time since I posted something in here... been busy with college work and all, these are some of my recent works, I wanted to post some life drawings too but I don't have them with me right now, will post them soon though.

[viscuswalor]

tried out a new style in this one...

[viscuswalor]

I have been practicing digital painting these days...

[viscuswalor]

Drawings done in life drawing and cast drawing classes!