Character: Monster for short film

**character** · April 26th, 2004, 05:21 AM

Hey all, here's a wip sketch i'm going to paint soon. thought i'd post in here for some feedback. Fipse mentioned that the banner looks too puny/flimsy so i'm gonna change that. otherwise, it's pretty much done as far as inking goes. will update soonish maybe noonish

**zeroe** · April 26th, 2004, 09:50 AM

great drawing
his sword looks a bit out of perspective to me.
and im having trouble distinguishing between the horses mouth area and the rest of the body, there seems to be no clear separation.
other than that no crits ^^

**Punq** · April 26th, 2004, 03:40 PM

I agree with zeroe, the sword does seem to twist a bit when you look at it. The tip would make you feel that your viewing the sword from the side, where as if you look near the handle its tilted toward you a bit. The horses mouth... meh no problem there to me, just seems his eyes were playing tricks on him, some color should solve that.

**skid** · April 29th, 2004, 08:45 AM

yeah, i agree with the sword bit, the horse is great, but the feet of the rider look a bit wierd:thumbsup:

**nevershotdown** · April 29th, 2004, 11:53 AM

i love it!
finish it please.
like now(lol)

**DanielandTheLionsPen** · April 29th, 2004, 03:01 PM

Ah that rules!

I would like to see the horns raised, and the armor full-plate metal instead: but that's just me. A monster riding a horse is just too perfect

**mogando25** · April 29th, 2004, 03:26 PM

Good job on the sketch. My suggestions include differentiating between the rider and the horse. As well, the little flag that is on the the monsters back kind of looks insignificant and floating. Maybe, bring the flag closer and extend the end so we can see it go behind the rider. A strap around his body may help with this illusion.

Cheers.