So I bought Lifestyle Illustration of the 60'swas flipping through and I was inspired by a Coby Whitmore so I was playing around with it today
anyways before I do any more would love some feedback......
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Level 5 Gladiator: Myrmillo
So I bought Lifestyle Illustration of the 60'swas flipping through and I was inspired by a Coby Whitmore so I was playing around with it today
anyways before I do any more would love some feedback......
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I don't really have any authority to be critting you but the thing that stands out to me is that it seems part of the hand is missing, the back of the palm area. Its mostly in shadow on the ref but its there and without it, it looks a little strange imo.
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Level 13 Gladiator: Retiarius
You lost the indication of the cheek on yours where she has a flower.
I own that book...I LOVE THAT BOOK!
Wait for the 50's book coming out later this year!
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Made any progress on this? I'm eager to see how its going.
"The whole point of practice is to do it until you can do it right." - dpaint
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worked on it some more today I like 85% of it...I have a real problem with hands if you look at my work I avoid rendering them at all costs. Like in this one to me they look like palsied sausage links.....why.....rendering hands to me is like Charlie Brown kicking that football I just keep hoping one day it will click....
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Level 4 Gladiator: Meridiani
watch the cheek indented a little too much,and the left eye open a little more
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Might want to move the canvas over to get the right hand more into the picture like the source.
And the pinky finger lacks the straight edge of the source.
Like the eyes though.
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http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=192127"Everything must serve the idea. The means used to convey the idea should be the simplest and clear. Just what is required. No extra images. To me this is a universal principle of art. Saying as much as possible with a minimum of means."-John Huston, Director
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