Hi dudes,
well i´m new to CA and hope to get some constructive critics here to learn and get better.
so here are some of the sketches i made:
Hi dudes,
well i´m new to CA and hope to get some constructive critics here to learn and get better.
so here are some of the sketches i made:
Last edited by Göddy; October 11th, 2010 at 07:19 PM.
Would be really nice if you could scale them down a bit, you can do it in any program even in paint. It would give the viewer an easier time trying to take a hold of the picture in their eyes. They look like very very quick sketches would be nice to see one with more time put in it to see how well you handle yourself.
But so far good structure in the faces. Better than mines >. <
sry for the huge size i thought bigger is better, so that people can see the structures better.
anyway here is some more stuff:
Last edited by Göddy; February 7th, 2010 at 05:45 AM.
more stuff
Last edited by Göddy; October 11th, 2010 at 07:19 PM.
Hey! I'm also new to CA, getting feedback is hard at first I noticed, you just gotta keep updating I guess.
Anyway...You should carry your observation into your imaginative work. The one sketch of the girl has nice features, (though you could add more detail). I think you also should work on the way you sketch, you use this overlapping and jolting method of sketching. Try with light single long strokes. In your life drawings/anatomy studies, trey not to keep out the head, make sure to add them in, even if it's a quick gesture of it. At least place the facial features, even if your focus is on other parts.
thx for your feedback, i will try my best to do that in my future sketches.
so here i made another sketch, drew the head and tried to make longer softer lines
another concept i made
You got some good stuf m8. The last post was really nice and scary. The blood looked very real and the shadows was awesome. The post before that looks good as well, just look at his right arm, I beleive his over arm, biceps mostly should be a little bigger in comparasion to the underarm it looks rather thin. A nice start for a sb keep it up! Ill step by some time again.
Cheers/ your friend PMB
"Painting my brain with memories of the future"
Pencil and brush is my choice of weapons!
My Sketchbook!
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=177145&page=8
thx 4 the feedback, btw here is another one i made.
Last edited by Göddy; March 3rd, 2010 at 06:24 AM.
You are getting better in the latter parts.
its been some time since the last posts, had not much time to upload something. anyway here something new:
youve done some great studies, you seem to manage the anatomy and the body structure pretty good. the last sketches looks very correct to me. Keep it up
/Brain
Cheers/ your friend PMB
"Painting my brain with memories of the future"
Pencil and brush is my choice of weapons!
My Sketchbook!
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=177145&page=8
here another girl
first portrait i drew in photoshop.
took me about 2 hours.
had no time to ul more stuff, so here is a bunch of drawings:
so here another photoshop practise.
here a very quick one. took me about 1 hour
another speedpaint. 2 hours on this one.
your last digital stuf looks very niceI just think the girls should have some lighter tone somewhere to make some contrast but they look very sweet. Keep it up
Cheers/ your friend PMB
"Painting my brain with memories of the future"
Pencil and brush is my choice of weapons!
My Sketchbook!
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=177145&page=8
a photoshop practise, its an adjutant from starcraft 2. first photoshop image i didnt do in black white before.
Last edited by Göddy; July 30th, 2010 at 05:17 PM.
finaly had some time to scan some sketches
a concept i made for a project
some sketches, got many more but no time to scan em :/
here a now speedy
a pic i drew for my current project
here some quick creature sketches i made during a lesson
a concept i made for a lesson. ment to be some eland creature with paws. could not use custom brushes, thats why the bg is so shitty.
cool concept and nice shading on the last one![]()
Cheers/ your friend PMB
"Painting my brain with memories of the future"
Pencil and brush is my choice of weapons!
My Sketchbook!
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=177145&page=8
here a robot i made some time ago... i wanted to finish him later, but i gues thats never gonna happen. so i put some color on him and declared him finished.
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