finally..

[foofoo]

i would never think of doing this in the past. Its a colour experiment which i learned alot from....... also thanks alot to Idiot Apathy for his advice.

I'll do some final touch up, so some comments on how to improve this piece?

[silverslash]

hmm more midtones?

all the black is making it look flat. (srry dodnt mean to ryme ..)

the lighting on the hair is inconsistent with the lighting on the face

i took a quick sec to show what i meant, im by no means any good but i think if u used less black in these areas the image would be a lot more interesting, maybe a nuetral darker blue to pop out the red?

justa suggestion hope it helps



cya

[Tully]

I'd add some cooler tones in the shadows. Maybe some blues or purples. I think it would add a lot more depth and interest. Right now it's looking kinda flat.

[Abbobaf]

The glowing eye catches my attention. When I look at it I see a small glowing thing in an otherwise gutted eye cavity. I would assume that it is supposed to be an eye with a glowing pupil, but the shading says otherwise. Perhaps you should leave a dark outline around the pupil and only have the exterior of the eye socket illuminated from the glowing pink-eye of doom...