Here's a picture I've been working on for a long time, but that was the point, I need to practice my rendering, though I want to keep some roughness to it.
The thing is, I've been knocking colors back and forth, moving characters, redoing the whole background and all but I can't seem to put get at what's really wrong with it. So that's my question, really. I think the picture is uninteresting and lacking focus, it falls apart.
Is it too bright? Lacking contrast? Too diverse in colors?
I do realise the ground and background are in a very early stage and the horses will be a bit more downtrodden in the snow, but I don't think that will change the overall impression.
Any help is much appreciated!