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    Witch

    Well I drew this a couple of days ago. I thought it looked pretty okay, though the left hand is a bit strange I guess...C&C are more than welcome!

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    i like the style of your drwaing.

    i think the problem with the left hand is the Finger at the top.
    don't know the english expresion .

    it is longer than the middlefinger.
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    Did I say left? I'm sorry I meant right
    Well I guess it's because the middle finger is bent a bit and the other isn't...But you can;t really see it
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    ok then its maybe that problem, made a short overpaint, hope i can help.

    ps: sorry not "to" --> "too"


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    I know the hand is too short and yes it helps but...I tried to draw it like that but when I do it she won't be leaning on her hip anymore so...
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    She looks pretty bored but all in all i think it's cool.

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    Well she isn't bored but I wanted to give her such a look like it. Not just a smiley face or an evil grin. Wouldn't match with the pose either. Thanks for the crits
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    then lift the whole lower Arm for about 1 cm and draw the Hand longer
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    WIP (I've changes the thing around her arms as you said, but left the hand as before. I was afraid to ruin it (again ^^))

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    with a little photoshoping i'm sure you can correct the problem easily. But i like how the pict came out, gj
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    Thanks! I leave the pic the way it is...But I will keep the crits in mind!

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