Mars Colony

[cody.rapley]

Hi guys,

I have tried using more of a grid and vanishing point in this to try and get the perspective and depth to work properly.



Regards,
Cody

[Velocity Kendall]

Looking good, obviously need to tighten up the sky and the rocks but that can be done when your 100% with the composition; no point spending ages on them only to chop them around or delete them.
Its slightly odd how you cant really see into the tunnel as a fence post is in the way, but this might be your intention in which case fair enough.
The lighting is fairly neutral, like a dawn/dusk setting, also fair enough, but maybe the street light could throw some shadows?

[Venger]

You've used rock textures in the backgrounds but not in the foreground?
Where do you want us to look? direct us with light as it's a little murky (if I squint at it the complex disappears.)

[Falchion]

I'm not sure what it is exactly, but the perspective looks off to me.