Robin

[subexisdance]

Still trying to figure out my techniques.

[johanson]

This image seems to be all about their environment. I want to really feel where these two are. Right now, that’s a little hazy… but you’re just getting started.

The cropping on Robin’s arms bugs me a little bit. It looks like he’s holding onto something important, like a weapon, but we can’t see it. Maybe you could bring his right arm up, and curve it so that it’s flush against the box he’s hiding behind. That hand could be holding the weapon, giving Robin that classic Pulp “guy pressed against the wall with a gun” pose. Just a thought. Looking forward to seeing where you go with it.

Hope this helped,

-andrew