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    The Life Giver

    When someone dies, the early people leave the dead on top of the mountains for the life giver's judgment. The life giver offers dead people a chance to live and be with their family again, that's if they've been a good citizen during their past life. But if they're not, The body and soul of the dead will be offered to the beasts.

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    Too similar in value all over the image. Anything with light eminating from it is brighter than something with ambient light on it. Good idea though.

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    interesting work! the red fabric kind of reminds me of how they used to treat spawn's cape. I think it gives it a little bit of a comic-book pin-up feel because of that connection in my mind.

    i would have to agree with the point being made about the lighting. there is lava and burning hot firelight below and a very diffuse white light emanating from the top background. Somehow there seems to be another front light illuminating the figure but not interacting with any of the other surfaces. I think it would make a stronger impact in the piece if she were lit with the hot lava light from below and her top contour would be defined by the diffuse white light from behind.

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    @dpaint & dimmak

    Thanks for the critic. i didn't lit her with the hot lava because the fire can't be seen in her foreground. it is inside the stairs, that's why i just added some glows from the edges of the stair holes. But yeah i think it would be more powerful if she were lit by the lava. But i want to stick with my concept and this application can make her look like a villain, and i don't like that. so instead of having a biased reaction regarding her personality, i added a light at the top front having only her as the main focus (since i want to maintain the evilness of the hounds) to make her skin glow eventhough she was against the light (the ambient light at the back). Regarding your suggestion, i believe that type of lighting could really make her look powerful too, but could be a bit misleading But i'll keep that in mind. thanks! I'll try to apply that suggestion but just minimal for this one and i think i'll just apply some light to her from the hounds instead. just a little hint of it
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