..._〆(・∀・＠) derp.

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aaand the last for the night. sorry to post these individually. didn't want to wait cause my internet is wonky. ><

jhator and his son rex.

[Pierce9]

Still the most elegant work I've seen around here. It's like what Mucha would've drawn if he was into punk. That last piece really looks like you were trying to get away from the elongated torso thing, you're doing good with that.

I read what you wrote on the first page, I lost a friend due to anorexia when I was in highschool, nobody knew she had a problem. Real bad times. I've got your sb sub'd now.

[Erotopia]

FINALLY got the MASCHINELL site up. Give it a visit and let me know what you think! we're working on getting the cast content up right now but i'm about to crash so hard it's not even funny. T_T

this has a lot of me and my partner's work up on it, including the promo tester comic we did for the sugar ninjas book, a ba'at glossary including number construction, some writing, and information on maschinell.



http://killthemachine.net

[Sulphur]

Your characters are so pretty
I think its those gorgeous mysterious eyes they all have

[Kitsunia]

Love the website! If I didn't have to go and deal with some BS concerning school, I'd be surfing for a while.
Ah well, it'll give me something to look forward to.
<.< I'm in love with that color scheme.

[Erotopia]

@ sulphur :: haha, i don't find them particularly mysterious. xD just super narrow most of the time. >w< but i'm glad you like them! 8D

@ kit :: LEARN BA'AT. DO IT.

profile pic of arjun for the new website.

[snatti]

really liked looking thro your progress, altho it's alot of anime but have no fear, i am an anime junkie, so it was quite a treat to watch

[Erotopia]

@snatti :: funny thing is, i really really don't like anime very much, outside of the great master here and there LOL xD

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pencils of karthik of the sky people from MASCHINELL.

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karthik finished.

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pencils for eshe, the great oracle.

[Falchion]

Lovin' the lines. Keep it up!

[Kitsunia]

Gorgeous work for karthik and I love eshe's face.
Every time I look at your thread it reminds me that I -so- need to do some sketches. <.<

[Erotopia]

thanks guys. >w<

@ kitsunia :: DOOO ITTTTTTTT

amadi pencils. i deleted the other one since it was like 15 minutes from this stage lol

[Pierce9]

Loving the new stuff, especially the Karthik piece.

The Oracle has some proportions off with the head and neck they're on the big side. There are some proportions off on Amadi's arm as well, and his torso is getting elongated. I think if you showed some more structure to the rib cage and dropped it down a bit it would fix the torso length. There's about a hand's width between the bottom of the costal cartilage and the illiac crest.

The designs are rad though, keep it up!

[Erotopia]

@ pierce: thanks for the tips! i'd already fixed eshe up cause she had a horse jaw. i did need her to bobblehead just a little and elongated her proportions a bit for freaky factor. I will fix amadi's ribcage though. big strong men still give me trouble. >< i've been messing with the arm already though and i think it's fixedddd. >w< thank you again for the critique! i was really trying to figure out why he looked to long LOL

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amadi all done up

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aaaand pencils i just did for another char design pinup thing, iio. feelin like her raised arm is too long so i'll fix ittttt.

[mrd33ds]

. I HUMBLY REQUEST THAT YOU PUT THE FEAR OF GOD IN ME.

Wow! Your style is absolutely beautiful. I would love to put the fear of god in you, but for now I CANT! bc its all very elegant.

[Eraiasu]

I browsed trough your sketchbook just now, and i gotta say this is awesome!
Enjoying those watercolor pieces, great work.

[Pierce9]

Love your colours, the pinup's turning out great. I don't think the raised arm is too long, it's her left that's too short (I just tried the pose and my elbow was level with the crown of my head. Maybe I'm a freak.)

Uh, fear of god and all that.

[raminafshari]

very well , these drawings really rock , reminds me prance of Persian and god of war games .

[raminafshari]

very well , these drawings really rock , reminds me prance of Persian and god of war games .

[RufousPlumage]

You amaze me with your prolificness.

Also, thought I would mention, the first one on this page - Jhator's torso is a little wide.

[Erotopia]

@ deeds :: thank you very much for your kind words. ;]

@ eraiasu :: thanks a bunch! >w<

@ pierce9 :: i think i actually figured out that it was that her raised forearm was too long and i fixed it! i also adjusted her raised shoulder so that it was less her arm reaching that high and more her body raising to accomodate it as well. >w<

@ ramina :: haha, i noticed that amadi kinda looked like the prince of persia when i was working on him. XD

@ rufous :: yusss, i caught that mistake too! but i just let it be since it's a sketch and moved on to fix it, which i hopefully have. 8D i think it's one of those mistakes i make when i'm trying not to do something, so i'm sure it'll be okay in future works. T_T hopefully, anyways. now that i'm trying to elongate people less, i'm going to cry if i start drawing exceptionally WIDE people LOL

And a costume design for jhator from my new MASCH molskine. >w<!!!!

[elyo11]

your last piece with karthik has great female anatomy! you should keep it close to that!
awsome sketchbook I must say!!
I lost mine-_- need to make a new one xD

[RufousPlumage]

I make my torsos too wide ALL. THE. TIME. It makes me nuts!! Almost as much as the unnatural poses that always seem to pop out when I attempt fullbody portraits.

That costume design is smoken'.

[RufousPlumage]

I make my torsos too wide ALL. THE. TIME. It makes me nuts!! Almost as much as the unnatural poses that always seem to pop out when I attempt fullbody portraits.

That costume design is smoken'.

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@rufous :: haha, naturalism just comes with practice. >w<

@elyo :: we'll see about that. ;D

finished pinup, kitty from atlands for nate piekos

[Pierce9]

Turned out beautifully, love the colours.