-pieces moved without propernotification.
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-pieces moved without propernotification.
Last edited by darkhero; July 19th, 2010 at 11:07 PM.
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why did this get moved?
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Presumably something along these lines.
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Well, since it's here in the crit section now, i'll give it a few words:
The lighting is really inconsistent. It looks like you arbitrarily are putting the hot spots on the center of rounded forms, and then just shading the turning edge, and then in some cases adding a weird rim lighting. Think about your forms AND consider what the lighting is. It'll be a lot more convincing that way.
Also I'd recommend using some reference for the anatomy, There people have some really wonky muscle groupings going on...
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This is a learning site. The mods of Finally Finished felt that you could benefit from crits to your work. Rather than taking a step back and trying to have an objective look at the situation your reaction was to remove your images and say '-pieces moved without propernotification.'
I guess if you're not ready to learn and improve, this might not be the best site for you right now.
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