Nightmare

**arghmisfit** · February 26th, 2004, 04:34 PM

this is the sketch i did just now, im realy trying to work on my poportions and stuff. May plan is to make this guy sleeping/slouching in this chouch, and have a big monster creeping up on him. help me out if something looks wrong poportion or anatomy wise

edit- i darkend the outline for ya:p

**aquateen000** · February 26th, 2004, 04:46 PM

i can barley see it, is it your scanner? ink it if you like.

**Morlok** · February 26th, 2004, 06:11 PM

the legs are too small - arms too big

**arghmisfit** · February 26th, 2004, 09:02 PM

progress report!

**Zeb** · February 26th, 2004, 10:33 PM

I spend about 80% of my day in that position0.

Foreshortening would actually cause the knees to be bigger than normal because of their closeness to the camera.

It also doesn't appear as if he is sitting IN the chair. It is more like he is arching his back with his ass above the cushion.

HIS right (our left) shoulder is off, making it smaller and giving a better connection to the neck would be helpful.

Keep at it.

Out.

**arghmisfit** · February 27th, 2004, 01:13 AM

thanks for the help dude! now i gotta start workin on the monster

**torey** · February 27th, 2004, 10:41 AM

a thought: maybe "roll his neck a bit".

make sure you can tell that his heads being effected by his posture.

if the doodle on the lower right is his hand, it might be too small.

it will be cool to see you draw this from start.

thank you for your art.