Teen Challenge 91 :: WarLord

[xinranliu]

final

[Eddieee]

Worked on it a bit more

Edit: okay...final

[Diarum]

lol mine is hella cheese but yea, I figured almsot no one else would do it

It did it just today, My anatomy and everything needs work!
The skin color is because of the "mud" they put on their body and what not!

[zelda_geek]

Final:

[SLIMEface]

Finished

[Homayun]

hey man,this challenge was amazing for me!!!!it pushed me to learn many things!!!!i learnd digital painting yesterday just for this challenge)
i love CA i love Teen Challenges!!:d
Have a nice day
this is my final image:

[Homayun]

hey xinranlu,thanks for ur critic,this warlord cause ur critic!thanks dude:d

[SunRoamer]

Final

E:
Argh

[skyline]

agggh just under an hour left, i will get this one done! its verry hard to alter stuff once you are past a certian point. grr

[skyline]

ok here goes my final, i could have spent hours more on this one, but i didnt want to over work it. the image comes out darker when i post it up for some reason but i dont think it affects it too much. there are some really nice ideas in this week great job everyone, and good topic lilnebo.

[zelda_geek]

Awesome round this time guys!

hunchback: I really like the colors and the mood. But the dark shapes at the bottom is a little bit confusing and maybe he could need a bit more space over his head.

Ludic: The guy looks like he has no neck, but I gotta tell you that if you really are only 13 you're very good for you age.

MoHog: Very interesting and creative design. Something about the pose bothers me, but I can't put my finger on it. Sorry.

Xinranliu: Awesome lighting in your piece.

Eddieee: Unique design, but the background doesn't look completely finished.

Diarum: He seems a bit out of place because of that black background, but otherwise I like it.

Auncer: You got some interesting texture going on, but the whole image tends to appear a little bit flat. That explotion is delicious.

Homayun: He looks badass, but the wings look a bit pasted on. Maybe making them darker could help.

SunRoamer: Awesome shoulder-armor, but unfortunately it doesn't look very finished.

skyline: Very nice mood. It shows emotion and I like it.

[Ludic]

Ludic: The guy looks like he has no neck, but I gotta tell you that if you really are only 13 you're very good for you age.

Yeah i agree, its kinda hard to see but he's wearing a scarf, covering his neck. thanks man.

[Homayun]

zelda tnx for ur critic,i agree!:d
but something about ur work:d
i think ur character leg is not clear,u should work on it,cause ur source light is front of ur characte!just this my friend

[skyline]

i cant remember the last time i finished a t.c do we have a finals thread?

[MoHog]

Critique time:

Hunchback: (bit reluctant as haven't seen the final) as always a really nice piece, enjoy how your work comes together. A nice take on the subject rather than a blood-soaked celt, i'd say just more definition and perhaps some small details to suggest his background.

Ludic: have to agree with zelda on the talent for your age, specially well done on the horse. really like the character + the detail of the skull. I'd say keep going with studies to make it more realistic and focus on giving the elements some weight.

Xinranliu: great use of light, really like the juxtaposition of the pose with the severed heads to add some menace. nailed the idea of someone who's in charge but can also commit some serious murder.

Eddieee: Keewl design, especially the wrist blades. main point to develop would be that the pose is too stiff, just mess about posing yourself as if you were the character you're drawing and you can get some good results (fun too)

Diarum: Shame that it looks flat, you've got the elements there just needs some rendering + the head looks at an odd angle. that said its a nice idea, and i like how you expanded on the character with the whole covered in mud idea.

zelda_geek: pretty epic work dude. really like your painting style + the colour scheme in this piece. relly didnt notice the missing leg haha, thats about all i can critique though. (trying to figure out whats off about my posing)

Auncer: completley different to everyone else's, who is the warlord btw? one of the sandbag blokes or is it the humvee? same critique as zelda's, i'd say have a look at atmospheric perspective. saweet scene though, nice piece.

Homayun: dude you have serious drive and enthusiasm, you'll go far. badass design, seeing as you only just started i'm just gonna say check out tutorials and practice - look forward to seeing more next time.

SunRoamer: shame its not finished, the line work and part that is painted are really nice. especially like the weight of the character you get from the posing, even without being fully rendered.

skyline: really is a great deal of feeling in the piece, love how you get a sense of the character and his backstory instantly. just...well keep up the good work.

nice work y'all

[Homayun]

wow!everybody should critic?:d
ok,here we go:
ludic:my 13years old body it's gooooo...d,just u shuld change sizes!ur warlord should becom bigger,just this:d
hunchback:nice style,just need little detail!

mohog:what the...!!!did u work somewhere like marvel or dc comics?:d
can u be my teacher?:d

xinranilu:
hey dude i like ur painting and lighting:d if u add blood lines on walls it becom more horror:d it just my idea:d

eddieee:work on background and little on anatomy!first choose ur light postion after that start shaiding!i cant wait to see ur next works dude:d

diarum:u know ur problem it very helpful for u!work on anatomy at first!keep it up my friend

zelda-geek:i said:d just leg!:d

auncer:something diffrent from otherone:-? good mattepainting my friend

sunroamer:
just like diarum,work on ur anatomy skill

skyline:nice real work i like it man,it give me a stronge feel

hey my friends nice challenge\m/
sorry for my bad english,have good time:-h

[MoHog]

ha ha, probably the highest praise i've got there Homayun. one day maybe tis one of my many dreams. don't think i'm really qualified to 'teach' but keep doing the challenges it really helps + im sure the other guys an me can link you up to some good stuff to learn from