Feedback

**Akiki** · March 9th, 2010, 04:55 PM

I'm looking to get feedback on a current, untitled work in progress.
I'm using Photoshop.

Thanks for any help.

**Sunny** · March 9th, 2010, 09:17 PM

I would suggest working on the lighting more. She is too lit up for that shadow to be so dynamic. Otherwise the composition could use help. Im not sure what I am looking at. Maybe it means something but Im not getting a good sense of it. Try to think about "What else can I do to enhance the intention of the image." that may require you to figure out what your intention is. If your intention is to just draw a sexy girl then you have already accomplished that. But realize that sexy girls are kinda boring without premise. The story can really enhance your image.

**Akiki** · March 31st, 2010, 09:15 PM

UPDATE

**Klaw** · April 1st, 2010, 03:50 AM

There is much more depth and warmth here. Keep Going! I think I see more of where you are going with this!

**Akiki** · July 14th, 2011, 06:05 PM

I would like to clutter the blank spaces in this piece with more random graffiti but I would like to get some opinions first. Do you guys think it's better to keep it as simple and clean as it is now, or should I fill it up?

Thanks for your time!

**Hatton Slayden** · July 14th, 2011, 07:13 PM

i would recommend taking out the florescent outline from here hair and leaving it more natural like you second post. Also i would do the same for the right side of your image, making the back ground more like the second post. I would not recommend changing anything on the current graffiti but i would recommend toning down her reflected light on the right side of the image and see how that looks.

**LordLouis** · July 15th, 2011, 03:10 AM

I personally would leave that graffiti and stuff out because I felt my eye was really focussed on her face in your #3 post, and now I'm not sure where to look first.

There are probably ways to enhance your image, but can't help you there sorry!

**Lissa-Quon** · July 16th, 2011, 05:53 AM

Oooh ouch - I'd get rid of the graffiti and pink hair outline myself.

I know this is probably a cheesecake shot but now the picture is practically screaming incoherently with all the random bright colors.

**clarithium** · July 17th, 2011, 12:18 PM

roll back roll back!!! The second pic was great... The neon colors and outline are a bit.. ick.

**Akiki** · July 18th, 2011, 12:47 AM

So, I'm not going to lie, I wasn't expecting the backlash against the new direction of the image but I do respect the criticism.

I've taken a step back; or, maybe forward?