OK. Its REEALLLY late because Ive been fannying around do webby stuff.
Not got time for comments, but thanks as always guys. Also, That Fat Kid - REALLY great crit man, youve given me loads to think about, and Im definitely gonna work it more in the direction you suggested. Story should be more obvious etc etc. Thanks again.
Go make sure its not broken or anything.
Ive made it all myself from scratch, so it might possibly do some whacky things. Ive got some tweaks I know I need to make.
Reworked an old piece for portfolio possibilities: