Thanks for dropping by my SB mang! I appreciate your feedback. Made me feel good!
I'm definitely seeing progress here, but, like KungFooWiz mentioned, you've got spend quality studying proportion/anatomy. I see you have studies sprinkled here and there throughout your sketchbook. I would highly recommend doing anatomy studies for at least 2 hours a day, every day. And when you do them, draw them over and over and over again. In other words, let's you decide "I'm gonna focus on getting better with torso today", find a few images of torso that you would like to use as practice material and then draw and redraw each of those images 5-10 times, at at time. I've been doing it recently (which I need to post soon) and I'm simply amazed at the progress I've been making, not just in terms of knowledge of the human figure but also my drawing skills. If you started drawing for at least 2 hours a day, to start with, you'd be blown away at how much progress you can make within a month. You gotta do it! Most of all, it feels amazing!!! 2 hours in and I start getting a head buzz, like I'm going to another zone (which you actually are...the creative zone! the zone of no-time and pure creativity!).
Anyways, I'm rambling at this point. Keep it up and don't stop!