First concept sketches Please Comment

[teddy007kong]

Im a bfa in painting at corcoran in DC and want to become a concept artist
i usually never do cartoons
so please comment and criticize cause i really want to grow here at conceptart.org
thanks

[Bulldawg Creative]

I like that you are creating unique and abstracted shapes/designs.

The issues that I see are:
The drawings are hard to read what is going on. I would do more life drawing to better understand, how to convey form and space.

What has helped me in the past is cast drawing, or skull drawings. Take a white object and light the object with one main light source. Then spend countless hours drawing. Focus on every little variation of light, shadow and form. If you have the patience, this is extremely beneficial for improving your drawing or painting abilities.

[teddy007kong]

thanks man
ill do more observation of value and shadows this month, ill post my newer stuff like my zbrush and painting projects
i just got a wacom intuos 4, i love it so far
here's my blog with my newest stuff

http://brainabyss-teddy007kong.blogspot.com/