Results 1 to 3 of 3

Thread: The Miner

  1. #1
    crepeau is offline Registered User Level 1 Gladiator: Andabatae
    Join Date
    Aug 2009
    Location
    Massachusetts
    Posts
    1
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    The Miner

    Hey everybody, first time poster here. I just finished a digital painting course, and this was my fist time using photoshop for things other than photos. (Not trying to use this as a disclaimer.)

    I would love to hear any opinions or suggestions for both the painting and the concept. Thanks ^_^
    Attached Images Attached Images    

  2. #2
    Foxtrot Wolfwhistle's Avatar
    Foxtrot Wolfwhistle is offline Art and Design Student Level 6 Gladiator: Provocator
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    England, UK
    Posts
    538
    Thanks
    26
    Thanked 120 Times in 106 Posts
    Three suggestions. One, work on the hands, they look very awkwardly placed and stiff, you'll benefit with a reference here.

    Two, think about that light source. Right now it looks like an action figure descending from a desk lamp. Is the light source natural or artificial? What time of day is it/what type of light?

    And thirdly, adding a few cooler colours will give this piece a real cavey feel, Make the highlights warm colours and the shadows cooler.

    I played around with the layer settings in GIMP. I added an opaque turquoise layer and found that overlay and burn both gave interesting effects that you could look at.
    Attached Images Attached Images  

  3. #3
    DAMJAN is offline Registered User Level 9 Gladiator: Hoplomachi
    Join Date
    Jun 2007
    Location
    charlotte, nc
    Posts
    1,273
    Thanks
    58
    Thanked 275 Times in 249 Posts
    foxtrot, nice light. and yeah, use reference, also, forearms are too long. Thighs are short.

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Similar Threads

  1. A Miner
    By Loksburry in forum CRITIQUE CENTER & W.I.P's & PORTFOLIO REVIEWS
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: June 8th, 2009, 04:35 AM
  2. IDW #78: Asteroid Miner
    By yoitisi in forum Industrial Design of the Week
    Replies: 34
    Last Post: September 25th, 2008, 04:16 AM
  3. Miner... again
    By Nicolás Uribe in forum CRITIQUE CENTER & W.I.P's & PORTFOLIO REVIEWS
    Replies: 14
    Last Post: May 5th, 2005, 11:11 AM
  4. Miner
    By Nicolás Uribe in forum CRITIQUE CENTER & W.I.P's & PORTFOLIO REVIEWS
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: April 30th, 2005, 08:24 PM
  5. Miner
    By Andreas in forum FINISHED ARTWORK- Finally!
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: June 17th, 2004, 07:07 PM

Tags for this Thread

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •