Autumn

**kittens** · November 28th, 2009, 08:57 PM

Todays work! This is the first time in a long time that I've been able to put pretty much exactly what I was thinking down without major issues!

I feel like she's having some anatomy issues, with the legs? I've redone them a few times but I can't seem to get it right

Any help or critique are very much appreciated as always ! Thank you! = D

**Giacomo** · November 29th, 2009, 06:24 PM

Looks fine to me!

**SaintAsh** · November 29th, 2009, 08:29 PM

Her right wrist is tiny!

**Havok Reed** · November 29th, 2009, 08:57 PM

yea, the wrist is considerably much smaller than the other. Also the leg that is straighened, i think there it is a little too long from below the calf

**kittymeow84** · November 29th, 2009, 10:52 PM

I think her front, bent leg, the thigh is too short - or the other leg is too long. If you take the distance from her belt to her knee (on the straight leg) - its veeerry long.

Hope that helps! This will be a really nice piece when its done. Love the colours

**dpaint** · November 30th, 2009, 01:30 AM

you did a nice job with the face but I think where the two legs and the bottom of her dress all meet creates a tangent that is confusing the position of her legs. Which is left and which is right.

**kittens** · December 2nd, 2009, 01:07 AM

Finals this week so I didn't have a ton of time to work on this so far but..

Thanks so much for the input everyone! Here a is a bit of progress. I tried to thicken the wrist. I think it that it is still too small, but changing it now will be a pain so I might just leave it, or make the other wrist smaller to match? I still feel like I'm having trouble with the legs but I tried to use your crits to fix them as much as I could! I think they are better than they were at least! = )

**kittens** · December 4th, 2009, 01:07 AM

Feeling like this is near finished and I generally like it! Please let me know if there is anything that could be improved as far as colors and such, the lineart I think I'm going to leave alone at this point unless there a quick fix that needs to be done.

Thanks for all your help as always! = )

**Havok Reed** · December 4th, 2009, 10:38 AM

Ahhhhh, very nice. Yes the wrist is still too small. The problem I see is that it is skinny for about half he length of her forearm. Legs are beautiful, but the same thing i keep seeing are proportions. her right leg is smaller than her left. Anatomically they look right, but size not so much.

Colors look great to me tho!!!