http://conceptart.org/forums/attachm...1&d=1258314254
not so much looking for a critique. But any suggestions on how it would look cooler
http://conceptart.org/forums/attachm...1&d=1258314254
not so much looking for a critique. But any suggestions on how it would look cooler
Last edited by Cakeair; November 15th, 2009 at 02:45 PM.
More of an expression? He looks like he's riding into battle but his face says "I'm bored and sitting at a tea party".
He looks pretty full of emotion in that mosaic. Note the raised eyebrows, intense eyes and slight sneer. This is an excited and arrogant man.
Although I have to say, I really like the energy in your version a lot. There's a lot of motion there, be sure not to lose that.
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"Skill is the result of trying again and again, applying our ability and proving our knowledge as we gain it. Let us get used to throwing away the unsuccessful effort and doing the job over. Let us consider obstacles as something to be expected in any endeavor; then they won't seem quite so insurmountable or so defeating." - Andrew Loomis
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