DefiledVisions & JoeS: Thanks guys. You're both right about the neck and could definitely use that extra work. I could easily spend another day or 2 on this but I'd rather just move onto something else with the lesson learnt. I did fix the neck a little bit tho, I spotted that as soon as looked at it this morning, not sure how it got so out of proportion. I was going for her having a long, bare, slender neck to heighten the vulnerability and youth but that was just way over the top. Thanks again!
jondawo: Thanks. You're right about the composition - I was intending to go with C actually, but I knew I couldn't do that in the time I had. Also, I saw most of the other entries were action shots and I did want something iconic, like a film poster maybe. I felt that it got the lost/alone/vulnerable feel across a lot more than C too (hopefully anyways). She looked a bit too strong and confident for me in comp C, but just personal preference I guess.
V3T: Thanks a lot!
I hate posting without any art so I might aswell upload the rough here..