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[Maya_The_Bee]

Greetings everyone,

Im new here. I cant call myself an artist really, i work as an industrial designer in the point of sale field. And im very fond of imaginary game art. Anything that pushes ones limits towards combining form , substraight and interaction. So i sit and come up with my own fun stuff at times. And Im serious about evolving myself towards fine sculpting. Yes, a newbee i are in this.

Please note i have no experience in organic modeling, have to get into that asap, and these are Rhino3d models build using splines and surfaces.

Please do leave your comments and also critics on how to better my work.

Thanx for your time talented people,

Alp (www.coroflot.com/germaner)

[Lord Cypher]

This is great. A really cool design. I really like the helmet & torso..its got a nice flow to it. Also the helmet looks cool with the front (respirator/grille thingy) added, i like how it lights up. The motif is a nice touch. Lots of nice little details.
The only thing thats throwing it off a bit for me is he looks to be leaning a bit too far forward (unless hes about to tackle someone?)

[Maya_The_Bee]

Thank you for your reply. You are right he s leaning too far forward. I wanted to give it some aggression but instead of pushing it with the torso it would be wiser to have a complete different studio setup. Or else, its a stomach bug

[Maya_The_Bee]

another shot

[Maya_The_Bee]

mission briefing session )

please do tell me how to enhance this layout. what would you do ?

thanks for looking!

[Darkwulf's Talon]

It's beautiful but Life is what you're after in this one. Try giving each one a personality.
Though this is ruddy difficult in full suits, can one have it's mask off?

Other things to try to bring to the fore
Different stances: All of them seem to have their feet exactly the same, can you change some whilst maintaining a realistic sense of balance?
Arms: Get one of them scratching his head :-)
Suits: Can you have slightly different colours/symbols or chuck some muck/damage on them?
Weapons: Though it may take a bit more work can they carry different weapons ready to 'roll out', lol

I like your sense of depth in the picture and the head torch effects are really good, chuck a few other things into the mix and you'll have something good :-)

[Maya_The_Bee]

Hi Darkwulfs Talon,

Thank you for your suggestions. I appriciate your input and everything you mentioned. I will sure to remember them before i render.