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    Ride WIP

    A few pointers would be welcome.
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    I think it's nearing completion...
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    There's something weird going on with the front horse. It's rump has a double thigh, at least there are three bulbous outcroppings there. One should be the belly and the other the rump, the third shouldn't be there.

    Otherwise, I like it! Good that you mirrored it again; looks much better facing right.

    One thing you might want to look into again is the back rider's hair, which forms a tangent with the horizon line. I'd move the horizon down there, so you'd have him sticking out slightly.

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    Tried to fix what you mentioned. But I'm not so sure about the hip part. In my ref there is some sort of muscle or something there... But I tried to fix it to make it look less appearant and more like in the ref. Hope it helped.
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