A few pointers would be welcome.
There's something weird going on with the front horse. It's rump has a double thigh, at least there are three bulbous outcroppings there. One should be the belly and the other the rump, the third shouldn't be there.
Otherwise, I like it! Good that you mirrored it again; looks much better facing right.
One thing you might want to look into again is the back rider's hair, which forms a tangent with the horizon line. I'd move the horizon down there, so you'd have him sticking out slightly.
Tried to fix what you mentioned. But I'm not so sure about the hip part. In my ref there is some sort of muscle or something there... But I tried to fix it to make it look less appearant and more like in the ref. Hope it helped.
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