~*Hanny Honeymoon´s scribbelbook - much critic is welcome (UPDATE 29-JAN)*~

[Hanny Honeymoon]

New stuff on last page!

Hello cuties! :3
my name is hanny and im from germany!
thats something from my ready stuff! my sketches come tomorrow ^^ i have to scan everything *sign* i hate to scan grey stuff >.>°
i know i make much much mistakes and i really hope to get some constucive critc! much work!!! *pick pencil*
greetz
hanny♥

[Burdie]

Please post more than one piece. It's hard to offer advice when I only see one thing of yours.
All I can really say is to try and do some life studies. And focus of facial structure.

[Hanny Honeymoon]

...here is something i sketched today
@burdie hey :3 yes i really have to do much life studies right! i try to do them every day and the results come up here :3

[Icedearth15876]

Very good work thus far, your anime style really impresses me. Keep up the good work.

[Sublimus]

Hey alright! Asian women!


More!

[G A I A]

...wie klein die Welt doch ist, manche Leute findet man echt überall wieder *g*

ich finde bei der Skizze die Hüfte etwas zu schmal, da wo sich die Rose befindet links knapp unter dem Fell müsste sie etwas breiter sein, die Oberschenkel wirken auch etwas "unkurvig" und zu dünn, die müssten etwas kräftiger sein, sonst könnte die Frau kaum stehen ^^
Der Rest sieht allerdings toll aus

[Hanny Honeymoon]

@ Gaia
yes mexxler are everywere ;D
naja die seite hier ist auch wesentlich besser und anspruchsvoller wie ich finde *kopfkratz* bei mexx kriegt man ja nicht wirklich viel gute sachen zu sehen.. :/
aber schön das du auch hier bist ^^
zu meiner skizze: ich finde auch das ich an der hüfte was verändern muss.. und der mund kann da nicht bleiben... aber die beine werde ich wohl nicht viel dicker machen weil die ist ja so ne zierliche

[miycko]

very nice your characters seem to have very long weists/stomachs, love the anime style, post more

[Hanny Honeymoon]

...my daily sketch ^^
haha she´s miss fuckface dammit i have to do more of realistic studies >.< im such a mangatrulla
hope it is not so wrong *sign* >.>°
see ya tomorrow cuties
hanny ♥

[ariel_medel]

Hanny,

I love your rendering. Just be careful with the angles in both your characters and objetcs.

Also, the last one needs work on the anatomy. keep up the good work

[Lateman]

hey sweetheart... good good! but MORE!!!!

[Kawauchi]

yey a fellow animeartist : D loved the first piece! gorgeus..You have a talent for colouring : )

I'd keep working on the anatomies though : O keep going : D

[Hanny Honeymoon]

@ariel_medel
thanks dear :3 do you mean the arms? i think they looks wrong ö.Ö and yeees its much to learn! everyday training in anatomie ^^ hopefully, i watch this one day and think, that i was a noop! *haha*

@late
hey darling everyday something new!
ich klemm mich hinter ;D und wenn nicht! KICK MY ASS

@Kawauchi
thanks *__*
jaaaaaai manga! i´m so addicted to! hum yes i´m working on my anatomie knowledge! ^^°
*promised* Ö________ÖV

[Hanny Honeymoon]

here it is
sorry i scanned it to small but im to lazy to do it again..
greetz
*nä-nä-nä-nää-nä-nä bääääätmäään* *lol* *watch movie*
hanny

[Hanny Honeymoon]

today i was working on my skribbel! ^^
i like it and i think i make it ready these days! only few lines left
greetz
hanny ♥
ps: the weather in germany is soooooo bad -.- warm, cold, warm, cold...
i had headache >.< *fuuuu*

[arestocrat]

Deine Sketches gefallen mir sehr
Finde deinen Stil echt super. Mach weiter so!

Achja, mit dem Wetter muss ich dir Recht geben, könnte wirklich besser sein -_-

[fusspot]

I think most everyone has commented about anatomy, so I'll just reiterate it. Maybe do some sets of gesture drawings and post them up for us to see.

You have a lovely style and I look forward to seeing it develop even further!

[Hanny Honeymoon]

@arestocrat
ich geb mir mühe!!! das muss einfach noch besser werden! >.< ihr müsst mich ordentlich treten das ich am ball bleibe ;D

@fusspot
thanks alot ♥ yes gesture drawings are really importent for me... because i have problems with the balance of faces..
its soooo much to do!
i need more dynamic in my pictures :/

[Darkside]

nice, very cute looking post some more

[Randis]

voll die fette Spritze ay das ist eine sehr ungezogene Krankenschwester hehe

[iphigen]

I like the one with the wings really much, it looks quite professional. The thing about the anatomy has been mentioned before, so I'll keep my mouth shut.
There's just one more thing I noticed: The face of my fave pic and the nurse look very much alike. I know it's not easy to draw different faces, especially when it comes to manga faces because they are very simplified... I tend to do this, too
But you should try to avoid creating yourself a comfort zone and only draw the same shapes again and again automatically. I don't wanna say you do this already, but it's easy to get to that! Hope you don't mind me telling you this

[miycko]

verry nice updates the stomach area's still long though

[Hanny Honeymoon]

Soooooooo here it iiiiis
@Darkside
thanks! here is something new ;D

@iphigen
the devilgirl is overworked ^^ much mistakes are gone
i make it ready these days! thanks for your critik! yes i have to try more different facestyles.. but i have problems with faces and have to work more on it!

@miycko
stomach is overworked in the ready version! yes it was a little bit too long!

sooo and here my scribbel from today!
see ya cuties! ♥
greetz
hanny

[G A I A]

Ich finde deine realistischen Sachen schon ganz gut, deine Art die Haare darzustellen gefällt mir ^^
Aber du solltest bei Realismus verstärkt auf die Augen achten, vorallem auf die Form. Die wirken noch etwas sehr mangahaft, da solltest du genauer differenzieren

[Hanny Honeymoon]

..guys! i was @ pardy and now im dead i don´t drink but only one day in the year i drink some 43er with milk (does it know somebody?)
wayne this day was yesterday and my headache is horribel! i shouldn´t do that.. it doesn´t make me happy, it makes me tired o.O
i worked today at the lines for my demongirl! ;D yes tomorrow it will be finish i think! so no new daily sketch from me ;0; but im totally working on the new art. im sorry! Q______Q
i need some asperin *gnah*
so see ya tomorrow!
greetz
hanny

@G A I A
danke dir :3 ja die augen werden bei mir wohl immer sehr mangamäßig angehaucht sein. ich haaaaaaaasse realistische augen. ich werde sie wohl nie wirklich zeichen. ich sehe da keinen sinn drin weil es einfach nicht mein stil ist.. ich werde immer bei meinem mangamäßigen bleiben schätze ich. aber die realistischen basics brauche ich ja dennoch.. auch die natürlichen aufteilungen im gesicht japp. aber die augen. äh nö so ganz pur nö xD etwas realistischer okay. ganz definitiv nein ;D aber ich geb mir mühe näher an der realität zu bleiben. ^^

[Hanny Honeymoon]

üff here is the ready version! what do you think???
from imagination and i hope this version is not so full of mistakes ^^°
greetz
hanny♥

[areve]

oh nice stuff here! some anatomy studies and you'll be kickass

[miycko]

lovely, great work on her those hanny comments are very funny as well

[Abrodos]

Cool work here! your anatomy looks good, yo've got a good grasp of form. I'd suggest starting by placing the head/chest/hips volumes. Your ribcages look a bit cilyndrical, and they should be more like an egg. Also, wider hips would make your girls more feminine.
Anyway, you've got some good pieces in here, especially the coloured ones. keep working on it!

[jatherip]

hehe, nice girls how about some studies on the neck? theyre ok, but i think sometimes they could use a bit work.....whatever
keep goin, lady!