WIP electric head

**Drin** · August 30th, 2009, 12:32 AM

NOTE: this is finished and posted here: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=168256

Would be interested in hearing crits on this WIP. Cheers.

**Drin** · August 31st, 2009, 05:46 AM

Alright well didn't add much but this is as far as I will be going with this piece FOR NOW (ie until I get a tablet with pressure sensitivity in a week, haha).

Self crits:
- could use a more dynamic composition
- face proportions are iffy at best
- lighting is probably too flat looking, though that was more or less intentional to create a specific kind of atmosphere

**MrEshovel** · September 4th, 2009, 08:36 PM

looks good i dig it! u should try to establish your ontop/bottom more, theres alot of parts that look like they just merg, i think they should be distinguished as being either ontop of the skin or comming out from inside

**Drin** · September 6th, 2009, 08:54 PM

Originally Posted by MrEshovel

looks good i dig it! u should try to establish your ontop/bottom more, theres alot of parts that look like they just merg, i think they should be distinguished as being either ontop of the skin or comming out from inside

Well I kind of was hoping for the merging effect, actually. Do you think it looks more like a mistake than intentional, though?

I got my first Wacom on Friday!

Super yay. I'll finish this off now.