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    I would like a constructive critique on this traditional piece I did of Wonder Woman. I did this in 3 1/2 hours with Inks, and Copic Markers. I would like to know what was done correctly, and what was done wrong. I am not looking for nitpicky crap, but really concise reasonable criticisms with the purpose of helping me to improve in coloring traditionally. Thank you very much...

    Ian Walker




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    I wouldn't have stopped the picture halfway down her chest, the eyes and lips could have been done more subtle and her head looks small in relation to her shoulders and bust. Other than that this isn't such a bad piece. There are no glaring anatomical or symmetry errors and i like the flow of the hair. With the medium you've made the pic in i'm guessing there won't be any retouches done anymore, so i'd say on to next one.

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    Oh just keep going. You are at the beginning of your creative career where quantity is far more important than quality. Drink more coffee, turn up the music, and don't stop for a couple of years. Find you own super hero inside, give us (the world) something new to give us hope!
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    I was told by someone that I have a style that is very different. That I have taken the traditional super hero look, and changed it up somehow in my style. Do you think this is true? What is your opinion?

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