Dr. Fazio's Marvelous Eco-Wagon

**RYE-BREAD** · July 31st, 2009, 05:27 PM

Title: Dr. Fazio's Marvelous Eco-Wagon

Hi! First time posting here :] I wish I had a whole thread filled up with progress and critiques for you all, but I only found out about this competition yesterday so I was a bit pressed for time. Anyway, enjoy!

**NIRONERU** · July 31st, 2009, 06:24 PM

only yesterday... but your work looks really good... what is your piece's plot...?

**RYE-BREAD** · August 1st, 2009, 12:50 PM

NIRONERU - Yeah, I wish I'd had more time to do something epic but this is all I could manage in a day or two. The plot's up to the viewer, really, but essentially Dr. Fazio drives his wagon around the winding roads of filthy cities, making the world just a little bit cleaner one street at a time.

**GriNGo** · August 1st, 2009, 01:49 PM

Really nice man, but I really don't know what this has to do with "newborn".. maybe "newborn clean streets?"

**riotorange** · August 1st, 2009, 03:02 PM

oh i really like that It makes me think of a reverse Murky & Lurky.
i know you said you only had a day or two, but i think it would improve the piece if you had more of the grass/nature type things showing. Perhaps you like it enough to continue working on it even tho the contest is over? i know i hope so

Also, i say it fits fine into the contest.The machine makes a new land so to speak.

Good luck to you and WTG on doing something so quickly! i had almost 3 weeks and i still just barely got it done far enough to submit. LOL