Cyberpunk - Female Nude

[Asmodeus]

I started drawing a female nude, then I added the wing - I didn´t want to draw another wing so I put the cables to compensate composition. I´m not convinced about her right breast.

Let me know what you think! I want comments and critics

[child of sin]

so great ^_^ i like it allot!
also i like the concept and lines. keep it up!

[DeadPepper]

I, too, like this a lot. Its a great style and a great concept.
As for the breast thing, i agree that the right breast doesn't match the left, perhaps either widen her left breast or reduce the right in size.
And i'd love to see it in color

Good work :chug:

[5-0]

awesome dude, your work is really inspiring in my opinion. i like it all. Yeah the breast is the only problem i can think of. You are really good at drawing females.

keep up the good work, would also love to see this one finished!

[Snowball]

Hello, I have to say your lines are very well layed out, and your anatomy is looking good, only thing I noticed first was her right hand fingers look a little too long, just a small crit, take it or leave it. Other than that looking good and would love to see some color splashed on her!

[die_with_honor]

Yes the right breast is off fix this small tragity or we will all die
ahhhhhhh the humanity
my god save us all
..................
Nice work. Asmodeus I just felt like repplying like that but I would agree its awsom. Thanks for sharing with this site.

[Asmodeus]

Thanks a lot for your comments, I´m glad you like it. This one was very satisfactory for me because she was my first nice lady (I wasn´t very good at drawing females). I see what you say about the fingers, and now I see there are some other problems with proportions.

I would like to see a color version too, but I´m not planning to do that thing. Anyone interested on color my pic?

There is another girl, very remiscent of Adam Hughe´s style. Someone said to me that her lips are a little big, and maybe it´s true, but I like that kind of lips -yum. Tell me what you think about her - and also about the old man.

[5-0]

that was me who placed that comment. I think both of them are very good looking. I would say the lips are a little big but they should be fine. Finish either of them, they are both excellent. If you finished one of them could I buy a copy with your signature?

[die_with_honor]

I wish I had sideburns like that

[jla]

hey snowball,
i really like your drawing! yah i do have to agree that you can fix the finger as well,it's to long and you should had a smaller crit, and the breast as well ill make the right wider!

For the drawing of the frist lady and the man well i love that drawing and i wouldnt think on changing a thing!


:chug:

bye

[malicious]

love your style asmodeus. no need to comment on the anatomical issue you raised, it's not *that* big a deal. keep up the good work.