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    Alex's mother nature

    Hi! I'm a bit nervous about entering this big competition, I'm not a schooled artist or anything, but I hope I will learn something from this .

    I'm going with something about mother nature, not very original perhaps but I hope I can do something from it. This first one I think is a bit stiff and unoriginal pose but with some interesting background it could work I guess.

    With the second one I want a younger girl that is casting some nature spell to grow flowers and vegetation. I think this one can be great fun to do with nice lighting etc. Al tough I do need some help with the pose I think.

    Any critique is appreciated! Thank you!
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    I decided on the second one, but I changed the "camera angle" a bit
    I'm not really happy about the face tough.
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    Tight composition on the last picture. If the petals were unfurling it would make her power look more awesome. Her eyes are a bit big if you're not going for a cartoon look. Keep working.

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    I'm really terrible at faces. I haven't had much time for this piece lately but anyway here is what I'm thinking regarding light and all that.
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