FINAL_Adaptation of the Pinocchio story.

**Randis** · July 22nd, 2009, 06:42 PM

thats a good idea. i wonder why no one came up with Pinocchio.
I like the composition here, looks fun and dynamic. Tho i would not let their feet overlap.

good luck! cheers

**Irawan** · July 22nd, 2009, 06:47 PM

This is an adaptation of the Pinocchio story.

I want to tell something different for my concept.
Geppeto is not lonely old man,he has wife and has 2 kids, his job is making a pupet from wood, in his city he is famous because of that.
after tousand pupets he is done,he get board with his job.
one night he try something totaly different as ussual, he is not making animal pupet but he try to make small kid like pinocchio.
he is so happy and find joy when he is doing "finish,now i give him color..." he took the color and he start to paint his hood.
but sudenly the puppet was life and taking/brake his brush....and also hit him from the chair,oh what happens then?
and the puppet sad"i dont like yellow hood,you know that!"

i am happy with geppetto character but pinocchio...?if i try something totaly different i am worried people doesnt recognize anymore.but probably better.i dont know...probably you can tell me what is good..

enjoy ..i hope you like my new concept.
cc are welcome,
cheers.heri

**Bhrandon** · July 22nd, 2009, 11:37 PM

all the faeries i know actually have way bigger boobs... feel free to plump those babies up!

**Irawan** · July 23rd, 2009, 02:47 AM

hi randis,thanks a lot for the tips for the feet.

**Irawan** · July 23rd, 2009, 02:48 AM

hi brandon, i am working now with my new concept.thanks!

**diissar** · July 23rd, 2009, 07:50 AM

Hi Heri,nice to see your cartoon style!nice idea too
for the critiques,pinochio's father left hand looks too straight for me,maybe you can curve it to make it better.it's cool man,keep it up : )

**Irawan** · July 29th, 2009, 06:08 PM

small update.

**Korendo** · July 29th, 2009, 09:42 PM

The Pinocchio story adaption is great idea and looks like a great start.

**Irawan** · July 30th, 2009, 02:17 AM

another small update.
hi randis,diissar and korendo thanks a lot for your support.

**JLPastecchi** · July 30th, 2009, 02:23 AM

ok i hate you.... lol jk STUNNING STUNNING. Im so in love with BOTH concepts. Pinocchio cracks me up...i really did lol. love the expressions on the characters! What program are you using to paint the fairy?...which is STUNNING ::faints::

**Vaejoun** · July 30th, 2009, 03:54 AM

Nice funny piece. It makes me smile ^^
Pinocchio even wears the disney glovers.

I can only find some small details that could get a little attention.
Like the tail of the cat, it looks wierd how it is attached to the body. I think that should be fixed by changing the last stripe on the tail a little.

**Irawan** · July 30th, 2009, 04:17 AM

Originally Posted by JLPastecchi

ok i hate you.... lol jk STUNNING STUNNING. Im so in love with BOTH concepts. Pinocchio cracks me up...i really did lol. love the expressions on the characters! What program are you using to paint the fairy?...which is STUNNING ::faints::

thanks my friend, i used photoshop for the fairy.

**Irawan** · July 30th, 2009, 04:18 AM

hi Vaejoun,thanks a lot! thats good input.

**Irawan** · July 30th, 2009, 10:26 AM

IN PROGRESS

**Black Spot** · July 30th, 2009, 02:59 PM

Oh wow! Another great picture in the making.

**NIRONERU** · July 30th, 2009, 03:32 PM

very nice... it now looks like it was rendered in 3d... would love to see it colored... good luck...

**Irawan** · July 30th, 2009, 04:51 PM

just trying with color.
hi Black Spot and NIRONERU thanks,cheers

**LillyCat** · July 30th, 2009, 04:58 PM

I love what you have done and the wips on going. I just can't wait to see the final

I love the kitty butt too rofl

**Irawan** · July 31st, 2009, 03:39 AM

This is an adaptation of the Pinocchio story.

Everybody knows the pinocchio story-geppetto was creating a puppet which finally got alive.
In my picture you see pinocchio just waking up in anger because geppetto was trying to paint his nose with pink colour.

cheers.heri

**_ttot** · July 31st, 2009, 03:43 AM

excellent!

**Irawan** · July 31st, 2009, 04:16 AM

final image_1000px

**Randis** · July 31st, 2009, 04:24 AM

Good job on this one! very entertaining and clean work

**ktkps** · July 31st, 2009, 04:59 AM

Smooth as silk! you got my vote!!

**NIRONERU** · July 31st, 2009, 05:03 AM

excellent... very sharp colors... and it all blends well together...

**Irawan** · July 31st, 2009, 12:55 PM

hi randis, thanks man!i am happy you like it.
hi ktkps, oh god....thanks you!
hi nironeru, ...thanks!

**Huey Yeng** · July 31st, 2009, 01:15 PM

Excellent job Irawan. I really like their pose a lot.

Overall a solid piece only I find the yellow dot (I don't know what is the correct word) at the cat butt is a bit bright. I still find it hard to not look at that area.