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    Looks great Black. I'm looking forward to seeing the finished product.

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    I'm still a long way off from completing - I work slow.

    Been pushing the values and started working on the hair.

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    she should dip one hand in the water, that would be a nice effect and a meat connection.
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    your entry good, though the cloth underneath her bum seems a bit out of place, her hair needs a bit more colour as well, try increasing the saturation on it a little. just a suggestion

    i agree with Randis, putting her finger in the water would be a nice effect.

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    Sorry, but I want space between her hand and the water, also it would take too long after breaking her arm to re-set. I did say I worked slow.

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    Thanks for stopping by my entry, your one is shaping up to be a goodie. That matted bleached hair looks cool, and you have some amazing water effects, will be looking forward to how this turns out will be staying tuned

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    Thanks AhChu.

    Been working more on the hair this weekend. This is just the under painting, which is why it looks like string. There is just over two weeks to go and I’ve got loads more to do if I want to finish.

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    Posted final in first post. Thanks for everything guys and good luck to everyone.

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    wonderful... she looks lovely...

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    All vectors right?
    I can feel those fishes swimming. Awesome.
    mwah mwah

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    Not exactly. I worked it in vector for the first month and then exported four layers into PhotoPlus, at which I'm just a beginner so had to learn the program as I went, which is why I made tons of mistakes. Give me another month and I might have actually nailed it.

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    A couple of years on my end and I could probably nail this one better.
    oooo .PhotoPlus I'll give it a whirl, thank you.

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