papervampire + moleskine

[papervampire]

hi, I'm 19 and these are my sketches. thanks for looking! do please leave a crit or just say hi.

[Melfey]

The old man with the axe ist great! I love your rendering.
I'm looking forward to see more of your amazing sketches.

[AustenFM]

Really digging what you've got so far, The anatomy and proportions on the first 3 ladies looks really good, but the old man seems off, though i think its intentional. No real crits for you yet, just keep on posting as often as you can so we can get a good look at your work.

I look forward to more, keep it up!

[hala]

I love the way you handle line work and the pencil. I'll be watching you!

[JParrilla]

the last one is really great.. awesome pencil work!

[SaiVix]

Hey thanks for dropping by my SB. I'm just here to say Hi though. Your pencil control is very nice. I would can't wait to see more recent drawings.

[Eiki]

WOH! GREAT quality in these! As the others said before
Want to see more new stuff, too!

[Jesus Food]

i also like the last sketch, his arms look like those flexible rubber figures with the wire inside tho, he needs bones to swing that axe man!

[Darktwin]

Hey Papervampire, really great start to your sketchbook, keep that pencil moving! A few things, your nose and lips seem to be a tad to close together. Don't forget to practice foreshortening of the arms and legs when you draw. Its really important that you practice this also, it will help you when creating dynamic poses. Keep it up.

[Twelve]

Hi Thanks for stopping by my sketchbook You have an excellent start here. Those are superb figures by my standards. I am certainly looking forward to more of your work Thanks again.

[mpdpsy]

man that sketch of the old man is so good! you render so well, something I need to practice a lot of, thanks for stopping by my sb btw!

[papervampire]

Melfey - thanks a lot!
AustenFM - thanks man you're right about the old man. his arms are silly!
hala - yay, thx!
biggjoee5790- cheers!
SaiVix - hi! thanks for stopping by!
Eiki - hey, thanks!
Jesus Food - haha thanks. yeah his arms suck, he has no elbows. i should remember never shade if the lines are borked.
Darktwin- love your work! thanks for the tips, you're right of course.
Daemien cheers man, i really appreciate it.
mpdpsy aw mucho gracias, hehe.

everything from imagination.

[FightingSeraph]

Amazing stuff so far! I would like to see you practice in color, though.

[hala]

I agree, lets see some more variety, though I love the quirky personalities of the people in your sketches

[Karein]

Your linework and rendering is awesome. Love it, it has so much character to it. Keep it up, I'll check back for sure

[wanimal]

nice job

[DazDaryl]

great!

[papervampire]

FightingSeraph - thanks, so would I hehe.
hala - thanks a lot, I love quirky.
Karein - cheers that's very kind.
wanimal - haha thanks!
DazDaryl - thank you, mate!

ok so here is a colour piece i meant to attach with the last batch. this is probably my first real stab at digital painting, so it's pretty awful. i'm hesitant to post it//

[papervampire]

sry there's no colour this time and probably won't be for a while till i can figure it out. me + colour = failure i think.

just a small update. thx for looking everyone.

[hala]

You think your digital painting is awful?! You put me to shame--that is definitely not bad. If you're hesitant to post that, then I'm really curious to see what consider "worthy" of posting---it looks pretty awesome already. Your color sense is not as awful as you think.

Love the characters with boots btw

[donalfall]

Great pencil work. Loving the use of the moleskine. Your Warrior Elf was hilarious.

[JParrilla]

nice pencils as usual.. taking a break from colors not a bad idea. Maybe if you get a stronger sense of value itll make color easier who knows.. keep rockin!

[JailHouseRock2]

Love the sketches!!

Those multi- limb ones are the best!

Cheers for stopping by my thread as well, Will be watching this sb for sure!
matt

[DeeStar]

Wow! your pencil work is great! I'll definitely be checking back.

[Jamie Romoser]

Great way to start your first page of your sketchbook.
I really like the line quality of your figures.

Till next time -Omerta

[The_Flying_Dutchman]

Good stuff, man.

[RoboMonkey]

That is some really nice linework over there, man !
Keep on working !

[AustenFM]

Really nice updates, love the girl with the lantern and elephant in the background.

Keep it up, things are looking better already, just remember to watch your proportions!

[nurraymjo]

Excellent thread. Outstanding pencil work in all of your posts... your digital looks great as well. Awesome work. /thumbs up

[dforman]

First drawing in the last post is great. Especially the arm and hand with the lollipop.