Craig Paton Illustration

**Craig Paton** · May 26th, 2009, 06:37 PM

Hello sirs, I've been a lurker on this forum for quite a while and thought it due time that I should build the confidence to post some work.

I've just graduated with an honours degree in illustration and I'm trying to find work as a 2D digital artist of some kind, preferably in concept art.

Any critique or advice you can give me is greatly appreciated.

More work can be seen on my Carbon Made page or my Deviant Art .

**clockworksnail** · May 30th, 2009, 07:46 AM

on the top photo, where the womans breast covers part of her arm just does'nt look real. i think maybe if you added some shadow and tone to it you might get a better effect?

i like the second picture the ebst. the guys face is nicelt detailed,

**Craig Paton** · June 3rd, 2009, 10:32 AM

Thank you.

You're right, that area does look a bit flat. I think I tried to exaggerate the curve of her breast a bit, and perhaps lost a bit of realism in the process.