Some character concepts

[brucereyes1]

Hi, I am Bruce Reyes, and I am an animation student and I do concepts too. Here are some of my character concepts stuffs done in ink and marker that needs critiques for me to know what went wrong and what needs to improve. Thank you very much.

Critique my environment concept thread:
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=156912

[JTown]

Since no on e else has commented - I guess I'll be a nice guy and try to help you out.

1) Sure you can draw - but I would suggest working on your lighting concepts. I really think the lighting on a character really makes or breaks a picture.

2) Your character holding the wine glasses seems to be unisex- this is uncomfortable because I don't know what to think of the character.

3) All your characters legs are too short. - Understandable with the mad chef- but otherwise questionable.

4) All your ladies seem to have lop sided breasts. Sure they come in different sizes- but generally they look close to the same.

I like the look and think you can do well with it.

I hope this helps.

JTown