jatherips sketchbook

**Rushlord** · November 12th, 2009, 03:01 AM

Ich schreib mal auf deutsch der Einfachheit halber. Du solltest dich auf deine Renderingtechnik konzentrieren. Wenn ich die Augen zusammenkneife sehen deine Arbeiten durchaus realistisch und gut aus, aber du musst sie weiter ausarbeiten sonst kommst du nicht vorran. Konzentrier dich auf eine einheitliche Richtung der Brushstrokes oder versuch der Form auch mit der Linie zu folgen. Damit wirkt das Bild gleich viel besser. Ich meien Farbverständnis hast du schon und jetzt kommt es nur noch auf eine saubere Ausarbeitung an.

**Enydimon** · November 12th, 2009, 03:53 AM

Nice sketchbook! And thanks for stopping by mine, this is overdue.

Wish I had something to critique, keep going!

**AlexEh** · November 12th, 2009, 10:12 AM

Been wayyyyy to long since I stoped by in here! Yah dude keep pushing it! Glad you got your self A REALLLLL sketchgroup becuase the old one tottaly failed. Looking forward to the TD marathon, ill be up alll night with you guys

Set up some colorful still lifes and take your time getting the colors right. I'm very sure it will help with your color. Photographs kind of kill the color D:

**Vatsel** · November 12th, 2009, 10:55 AM

Originally Posted by Dy.laneA

Looking forward to the TD marathon, ill be up alll night with you guys

HELL YES!!!!

**Incinerated** · November 12th, 2009, 05:56 PM

great stuff man, I think you should try pushing something til you cant push no more.

I wanna see what you can get out of that skill of yours.

**jatherip** · November 12th, 2009, 06:59 PM

Mark Vatsel: thanks!
Krato: its AN ALIEN!
kingkostas: thanks

Rushlord: danke, ich werde es berücksichtigen

Enydimon: thanks

Mark Vatsel: its gonna ba awesome!
Incinerated: thank uuuu

1. BIG ANNOUNCEMENT: IM GONNA FINISH MY STUFF MOAR IN THE FUTURE!
2.heavy critique on this please

i had more, but my pc crashed -.-

**Krato** · November 12th, 2009, 07:26 PM

i guess make it less choppy and push the values more

**p sage** · November 13th, 2009, 02:05 AM

Here's my harshest crit. Stop doing photo studies.

Read this post by Mentler So this is not just me talking

This would mean drawing from life more. I guess photos have their place... but the great masters in ancient Greece didn't have photos.

I've used photos to get gesture from in the past, but I think Mentler's right.

**Vatsel** · November 13th, 2009, 03:23 AM

smooth that thing out
jawline goes back too far
put the left eye in perspective
bad neck construction
define the nose

**kingkostas** · November 13th, 2009, 04:08 PM

the neck seems strange.Check it out.Will crit more later.Dont leave the blendings/graduations that rough.You must render render render following the 3d surface of the things.And dont use to many values.You can always put highlights in the end, easily.
keep up

**jatherip** · November 13th, 2009, 07:12 PM

Krato: thank you

p sage: thank yoouuu thats awesome....soo: more from life!!!
Mark Vatsel: thank you! thats what i need!
kingkostas: thanks, master

i know youre pro at that...

thanks for your support! mor critique on the face thing please
make me cry againnn!

**kingkostas** · November 13th, 2009, 08:14 PM

nice it already looks great.
There is no reason to make you cry.You will cry by yourself if you stop trying hard because then you will realize the loss

see ya

**blexano** · November 13th, 2009, 08:22 PM

Hey jatherip,
so I did a quick paintover of your face in #516.
Just remember the form of the skull, no matter how quick your sketch is never paint just a face and do just some hair around it. The cheekbones are also important and pay attention to the lighting and the values of a face when it is hit by it. Also think about which parts make the face look feminin...
For the skintone colors you should always mix it a bit with the background color.
Well I'm tired if you want to know what I meant, dann frag mich einfach.

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Hoffe dir hilft's etwas.
Gefällt mir übrigens, wie du dir in den Arsch trittst.
Du machst Fortschritte.

**no87** · November 13th, 2009, 09:30 PM

i would say on the wip step face that the eyes feel alittle large maybe. the skin tone needs more rendering and the hair feels kinda strange. it would come more down by the ear. also the ear looks a little long. saying that blexano seems point alot of that out any ways. keep it up man your doing great!

**Vatsel** · November 14th, 2009, 02:13 AM

blexano pretty much made the image there.

nothing to add on your other stuff, things are lookin gooood

**miycko** · November 14th, 2009, 03:55 AM

keep going man

looking forward to that 10 hour study

**LMK** · November 14th, 2009, 06:42 PM

man, i like you studies man, keep going, i like the rendering on this image attached, how long did it take you? doesn't matter in the end i guess as long as it's guality, would love to see it be a bit tighter, nice SB, keep going

**jatherip** · November 14th, 2009, 07:31 PM

kingkostas: haha thanks

blexano: wowowow! vielen dannnkk!!!
no87: thank you

Mark Vatsel: thanks

miycko: me, too, yeah

LMK: prolly 45 min....thanks

**Krato** · November 14th, 2009, 07:43 PM

so lets see that long study tomorrow

!

**kingkostas** · November 14th, 2009, 08:12 PM

fuk i love the first one.Your understanding is growing.
Still a little tight with the portraits but thats about the structure part.The rendering is becoming better
Keep going

**Vatsel** · November 14th, 2009, 10:50 PM

everything except number 5 looks good

keep going

**Helaine** · November 15th, 2009, 01:31 PM

Jatherip, I'm wondering when are you going to make a polished, fully blended work XD

Just once in a while

The wips are looking good, especially the first girl in armor. Keep it up!

**jatherip** · November 15th, 2009, 06:12 PM

Krato: yes
kingkostas: thanks

Mark Vatsel: i liked it

Helaine: Thank you

I fear im not gonna do a ten hour study this week. prolly that greyscale sketch with the three figures...
critique pleaassee!

**Frittzell(Image)** · November 15th, 2009, 06:55 PM

Dang those scissors are amazing!
Keep up the good work!

**Bombur** · November 15th, 2009, 07:15 PM

Dude, those still lifes and the selfportrait are great. Your colors are really nice as always. The nose and lips look strange on the first portrait though.

**Bendragon** · November 15th, 2009, 07:31 PM

Studies are looking good. Perhaps try get some more emotion and expression in their faces.

**p sage** · November 16th, 2009, 02:00 AM

Hey Rip...

You're getting away from photos and drawing from life, out of your comfort zone. That's great. Really dig the scissors and the self-portrait...BIG improvement there.

Although that scarf still looks Nancy. And is that lipstick?

XD

Keep kicking ass Mein Kommandant!

**Vatsel** · November 16th, 2009, 02:11 AM

watch your stroke economy, perspective and edges.
keep it up

**Rushlord** · November 16th, 2009, 04:22 AM

Great sketches lately. I really like the more polished sketches and those paintings from life are great. And blexano did a cool paintover too

**jordyskateboardy** · November 16th, 2009, 06:56 AM

Cool shit man. You do so much in one day lol. But yea the last sketch is what ive been missing from you. A more finished rendered piece. Good job on that one. But you could still push it just a little further XD.

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