Teen Challenge 58 : [Finals&Poll]

**a la bapsi** · February 3rd, 2009, 11:24 PM

Teen Challenge

Voting!

let's ask for thumbnails of your entries next time. :|

AYLAP

RYUSENKA

HUNCHBACK

JAILHOUSEROCK2

RONALD LIU

**JailHouseRock2** · February 4th, 2009, 01:28 AM

Cheers la bapsi , and my apologies for not adding a thumbnail, my bad.

I voted for AYLAP's as it reminds me of... well me, apart from I'm not a chick and I dont smoke, but art is one of the main things that keep me awake.

Lolz and thanks for whoevers already voted for me.

**aylap** · February 4th, 2009, 06:45 AM

Sorry for not adding a thumbnail, I'll be sure to do that next time

I actually voted for yours, Jailhouserock2 (actually before I read your comment so no one thinks I'm biased or something xD), because I like the design and the rendering the best, plus it reminds me of when I was little and I had trouble going to sleep (for whatever reason at the time)

Oh, and I don't smoke either, that's actually a pencil, even though it doesn't look like it. xD Bleh smoking sucks >_>

Anyway, thanks Jailhouserock and whoever else votes for me!

**Wiggles** · February 5th, 2009, 12:13 AM

Woah, this one slipped right underneath me!

Great job to everyone!

AYLAP: Very real and I understand it immediately. I really like how all the focus goes right to the drafting table, the solution, or the problem, of your character's insomnia. For some criticism, the proportions of the chick's right arm look really bulky where it meets the shoulder. (She almost looks a lil butch
RONALD LIU: I love your design, very original and symbolic.... I know that may not be what was intended but I see it!

I hope to continue with critiques tomorrow!

**aylap** · February 5th, 2009, 10:58 AM

Hmm...then I probably shouldn't have used myself for the reference picture...xD (I have big muscles...good for being strong but bad for being attractive.

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**JailHouseRock2** · February 5th, 2009, 11:23 PM

Great job guys,
Right then...

aylap- As I said I connected with yours and like Wiggles said it was very easy to understand, I do think that you may have rushed the rendering a bit, but it still reads well.

RYUSENKA- I really think the image would benefit from another 5 minutes of cleaning up, just to erase some pencil lines and clean up some brush work. I'm really liking the strong use of colour in you piece and the idea behind it.

HUNCHBACK- Really dig this one HUNCHBACK, great use of colour and I think I get the idea (something about having your head in a bubble?) and love the red (blood?) coming out the corners of the eyes.

Ronald Liu - Great stuff from you as well mate, Like Wiggles I really love the organic symbolic design. Awesome colours and Love the brush strokes. nice one.

Great work again people!

cheers,
matt